染雾作文犯错以后 篇一
近期，我在写作文的过程中犯了一个大错，我深感内疚和后悔。这次经历让我意识到了写作的重要性以及对于错误的反思和改正的重要性。
这次犯错的作文是一篇关于环境保护的文章。在准备阶段，我对这个主题进行了大量的研究，积累了大量的素材和观点。然而，在写作过程中，我没有充分展示出这些素材和观点，而是仅仅表达了我个人的观点。这样一来，文章的论证力度不够，观点也显得片面和主观。当我提交作文后，老师批评了我，并指出了我的错误。
收到批评后，我开始反思自己的错误。我意识到，写作不仅仅是表达自己的观点和想法，更重要的是要有充分的论证和事实支撑。我反思了自己在写作过程中的不足之处，发现我在准备阶段没有充分整理和运用好素材，也没有进行充分的论证和推理。这导致了我文章的缺陷，使得观点没有得到充分的展示和论证。
为了改正这个错误，我决定从准备阶段开始做起。我会更加认真地进行素材的整理和研究，确保有足够的论证材料来支持我的观点。同时，我也会更加注重论证的力度和推理的逻辑性，使文章更有说服力。我还会更多地参考一些优秀的范文和专家的意见，学习他们的写作技巧和思维方式，提高自己的写作水平。
这次犯错的经历让我明白了一个道理：写作是一个不断学习和成长的过程。我们不能因为一次错误就放弃，而是要从错误中吸取教训，不断反思和改进。我相信，通过这次经历，我会更加谨慎和认真地对待写作，取得更好的成绩。
作文犯错以后 篇二
写作是一门艺术，也是一种表达自己观点和思想的方式。然而，每个人在写作过程中都可能犯错，这是难免的。关键在于我们如何对待和处理这些错误，以及如何从中吸取经验教训。
在我写作的过程中，我也曾犯下过一些错误。最近一次的错误是在一篇关于环境保护的作文中。在这篇作文中，我没有充分展示自己的观点和论证材料，导致文章的说服力不够强。当老师批评了我的错误后，我开始反思和总结。
首先，我明白了写作的重要性。写作是一种表达自己观点和思想的方式，也是一种思维和逻辑的训练。通过写作，我们可以更好地理清自己的思路和观点，同时也可以锻炼自己的逻辑思维和表达能力。因此，我意识到写作是我必须要重视和不断提升的能力。
其次，我明白了对错误的反思和改正的重要性。每个人在写作过程中都可能犯错，关键在于我们如何面对和处理这些错误。而我认为，对错误的反思和改正是非常重要的。通过反思和总结，我们可以找出自己的不足之处，进而改正错误，提高自己的写作能力。
最后，我明白了成长需要时间和努力。写作是一门艺术，需要不断地练习和积累。我们不能因为一次错误就放弃，而是要坚持不懈地努力，不断提高自己的写作水平。我相信，只要我保持对写作的热爱和追求，我一定能够取得更好的成绩。
总而言之，写作犯错并不可怕，关键在于我们如何对待和处理这些错误。通过对错误的反思和改正，我们可以不断提高自己的写作能力，并取得更好的成绩。让我们珍惜每一次写作的机会，不断努力，成为更好的写作者。
作文犯错以后 篇三
黄一彪
记得那时上二年级的时候，爸爸给我做了一把小弹弓，我当时就迷上了它，恨不得成为一个百发百中、百步穿杨、弹无虚发的神弓手，问题就出在这里。我因为要在同学们面前展示一下我的弹弓，就把弹弓带到了学校。
上午第一节下课，美妙悦耳的下课铃又响起来了，我拿出心爱的弹弓，正挥舞着玩的时候，一个我极不想听的声音出来了。
“黄一彪！”只见数学老师双眼恶狠狠的瞪着我，“在这时来学习的不是来玩的！明天叫你爸过来拿回去！”说着，便从被泼了一脸冷水的我手中夺走了弹弓。
这一天，我在是恐惧中度过的。
中午我在走去食堂的路上，经过了老师的办公室。我躬下背，屏住呼吸，腿一蹬，一股劲儿冲过老师办公室，生怕被老师看见。
下午，我收拾着少了东西的书包，不禁想：唉！早知今日，何必当初呢？
离家越来越近，不详的预感越来越浓，最后就在家门口了，我顿时感觉平时熟悉、舒适的家变成了一栋未知、恐怖的鬼屋。我战战兢兢的地走进去，对爸爸说“爸……爸爸，老师叫你明天去学……”
被叫家长太恐怖了，我不想再被请家长了！
作文犯错以后 篇四
“记住穿好衣服!”
xxxRemember to get dressed!xxx
“记住做作业!”
xxxRemember to do homework!xxx
“记住……
xxxRemember ...
这是我妈妈的格言‘记住——’。放学后，我一进家门，妈妈的格言又冲着我喊了：“晚饭后，记住作业!”我不耐烦的打断了她的话：“哆哆嗦嗦的，像个老太婆。”我悄悄地抬起头瞟了妈妈一眼，觉得刚才太冒失了，转身进了房间。妈妈那惊鄂的模样、怀疑的目光不停地浮现在我的眼前。我知道犯了错，我真不该对妈妈说话，我知道妈妈只是我而已，而我却对妈妈说话。，我勇气推开门，对妈妈说声：“起。”晚上，我躺在床上，妈妈那惊鄂的模样、怀疑的目光又在我的眼前浮现了。“妈妈，我知错了。你会不会原谅我?我以后还可以听你的格言吗?你会生我的气吗?我越想越难过，枕巾不知不觉湿了。这时，我听见一阵轻轻的叹息。那叹息，肯定是妈妈的!妈妈，你是怪我伤了你的心?你是怨你付出的心血?一阵凉风吹来。啊!凉风，请你把我妈妈对我的生气吹散，请你把妈妈的叹息吹走。天早晨，妈妈不冷不热地招呼我。我再也听妈妈的格言了。平时，我觉得妈妈的“记住——!”讨厌。而听妈妈亲口说的“记住——!”我心中反而有些失落感，心里空空的。妈妈，我想听到你的格言，听到你的再三叮嘱。人们常说母爱是世界上最、最纯洁的爱;母亲是世界上最和蔼、最亲切的人。我想你的爱。在课堂上，我也听不进去了，只希望早点见到你，早点你的原谅。放学了，我急匆匆地跑回家。看到正在干活的妈妈，满头大汗，我也抑制不住的感情了，扑到妈妈的怀里痛声大哭：“妈妈，我错了。请你原谅我吧!“妈妈抚摸着我的头，脸上了欣慰的笑容。
This is my mother's motto ‘remember —’. After school, as soon as I entered the house, my mother's words shouted at me again: xxxAfter dinner, remember the homework!xxx I impatiently interrupted her words: xxxOh, like an old lady.xxx I quietly Raising his head and glanced at the mother, feeling that it was too much just now, and turned into the room. My mother's appearance and doubtful eyes kept appearing in front of my eyes. I know that I have made a mistake. I really shouldn't talk to my mother. I know that my mother is just me, but I speak to my mother. I pushed the door courage and said to my mother, xxxStarting.xxx In the evening, I was lying on the bed, and my mother's appearance and doubtful eyes appeared in front of my eyes. xxxMom, I know wrong. Will you forgive me? Can I still listen to your motto in the future? Will you be angry with me? The more I think about it, the more sad, and the pillow towel is wet. At this time, I am I heard a gently sigh. That sigh, it must be a mother! Mom, are you blame me to hurt your heart? Are you complaining about your efforts? A cool breeze blows. Ah! Cool breeze, please take my mother Blowing my anger, please blow away my mother's sigh. On the morning, my mother greeted me coldly. I heard my mother's motto again. Usually, I think my mother xxxremember!xxx I hate. And listen to my mother said, xxxRemember -!xxx Instead, I feel a little lost in my heart. My heart is empty. Mom, I want to hear your motto and hear your repeated instructions. People often say that mother love is the world's best in the world. , The purest love; mother is the most kind and cordial person in the world. I think your love. In the classroom, I can’t hear it. I just hope to see you earlier and get your forgiveness early. I hurried home. Seeing the mother who was working, sweating, I couldn't restrain my feelings. I cried in my mother's arms: xxxMom, I was wrong. Please forgive me! xxxMom stroked my head and smiled with comfort.
妈妈，我喜欢你的格言，更喜欢你!你给了我的支持;给了我鼓励;给了我全世界最、再纯洁的母爱。我希望永远你的爱。
Mom, I like your motto, I like you more! You gave me support; I encouraged me; gave me the most and pure mother love in the hope your love forever.
作文犯错以后 篇五
林宇涛
四年级上册的时候，由于我一巴掌打了金可妮，老师大发雷霆，当时心想：“如果当时我不打他，那就没这回事儿了。”我后悔莫及。
下午我在回家的路途中，天空中偶尔吹来一阵刺骨的寒风，打在我脆弱的身躯中，是我身体一颤。天空阴沉沉的，如同一朵毫无生气的花儿，我的心情也跟着这环境而变化，老师带我语音如同寒风，牢牢的扎在我的脑海中，一直徘徊。
来到了家中，我十分的紧张，生怕妈妈一个电话甩到奶奶带我手机中。我小心翼翼的潜回房间，心惊肉跳，可该来的迟早要来。突然我的手机响起了“恶魔来临的声音”——妈妈的电话声，我紧张地拿起手机，心里如同藏了一直兔子，在那四处乱跳，我心想：“早知今日，何必当初呢？”我接起电话，只听里面传出了一连串的话语“你怎么回事儿啊？犯了这么大的错，老师的声音都哑了，你……”妈妈大声交道，我心中已经凉了半截，大气也不敢出。
晚上我心想：“明天应该不会有什么好果子吃了，只能步步为营了，希望明天老师的火气能消遣一点吧！”我忐忑不安的闭上了眼睛。
寒风呼呼的刮着，我的魂也随着飞走了……
作文犯错以后 篇六
话说今天真的好险。
It is really dangerous today.
开级会时级长总结了这个学期发生的好人好事和坏人坏事。另一位级长则给我们讲学习的方法，其实我也听得不耐烦了，因为上次优生开会时已经讲过，但想到这次考的这么差，我还要加把劲，所以才勉强的听了下去，但其他同学90%都是在讲话，要不就
是一个人发呆。听的过程中，也有不少的收获，毕竟我们现在只是初中生，难免会有犯错的时候。
During the opening meeting, the head of the meeting summarized the good people and bad things that happened this level commander told us how to learn. In fact, I was impatient, because I have said at the time of the conference of eugenics last time, but I think of the bad time in this test, I have to work harder, so I can do barely, but 90%of the other students were speaking, or they were in a the process of listening, there are also a lot of gains. After all, we are only junior high school students now, and there will be a time to make mistakes.
盼星星盼月亮，终于盼到放学了，轮到我们班回教室时，老师吩咐我们全班要留下来，这时就有不详的预感。回到教室后，老师脸色大变，像吃了炸药似的。同桌说不会是批评刚才开级会讲话的人吧。果然，还真给她说对了。老师大声说刚才在开级会时讲话超过十句的同学给我留下来!其他的同学可以去活动。糟了，谁料到还有这样的规矩，看来老师是真的生气了。想想刚才，我还真没讲话超过十句呢。因为另一位同学说要跟同桌一起坐，于是我就和其他同学一起坐呗。她也没说什么，只顾看前面两位在偷偷的下棋——一种近排流行的在纸上玩的四子棋。所以我也没说什么，自己坐在那里听级长说话，而同桌则在我后两座跟别人谈得很尽兴。
Looking forward to Xingxing and looking forward to the moon, I was finally looking forward to school. When it was our turn to return to the classroom, the teacher instructed us to stay in the class. At this time, there was unknown returning to the classroom, the teacher changed his face, like eating the same table, it would not be the person who just criticized the opening of the enough, she really told her teacher said loudly that the classmates who had just spoke at the opening meeting for more than ten sentences left me! Other students can go to the , whoever expected to have such a rule, it seems that the teacher is really about it just now, I really didn't speak more than ten another classmate said that she wanted to sit with the table, so I sat with other didn't say anything, just looked at the two men who were secretly played in front -a four -son chess played on I didn't say anything. I sat there and listened to the level, and the same table was very happy to talk to others.
I packed up the book bag and went to the playground to go to the playground to go to the playground with a big badminton. By the way, she was waiting for the same table. She stayed and waited for the 's about 5:45, hold the book at the same table, she thought I had asked her the teacher how to criticize them, and she said that the teacher just called 500 words review .
路上碰见老师了，她去饭堂吃饭，我和同桌喊了声她，然后无语。可能还对她有些恐惧感吧。
I met the teacher on the road. She went to the canteen for dinner. She shouted her at the same table, and then a little bit of fear of her.
试问孰能无错，改过了就好，做错了要敢于承担责任。想起那件事，我总是有些惭愧，那次我真的做错了，可却不敢承认——我没有那个勇气。不得不承认自己是个懦夫。
I can ask if it is wrong, just change it. If you do something wrong, you must dare to take of that matter, I was always ashamed. I really did wrong that time, but I dare not admit -I didn't have that have to admit that I am a coward.
以后我一定不会做懦夫了，我要做个正直的君子，“君子坦荡荡，小人长戚戚”嘛，不知怎么会想起这句话来，
In the future, I will never be a coward. I want to be an upright gentleman.
